When you say you showed your expressions and that the audience enjoyed it..... WHAT were your expressions and WHY did the audience enjoy them? You have to give me details and examples. You told me the music you used but you forgot to say WHY you used them. You explained what the music sounded like but you didn't explain to me how the music correlated to each character. I"m glad I was helpful :) Nice that you brought in ATLs with collaboration.
Karan,
ReplyDeleteWhen you say you showed your expressions and that the audience enjoyed it..... WHAT were your expressions and WHY did the audience enjoy them? You have to give me details and examples.
You told me the music you used but you forgot to say WHY you used them. You explained what the music sounded like but you didn't explain to me how the music correlated to each character.
I"m glad I was helpful :)
Nice that you brought in ATLs with collaboration.
Criterion D: 5